In this first draft, a lot of my comments were more about the overall idea of making sure the essay sounded right in the wording and if at any point, I really had to stop and think about what was happening in the essay. Later on as we went along in the peer review process and as I changed how I peer reviewed, my later comments ended up being about whether they explained the quotes well enough or if they could add more quotes. My comments shifted from sentence structure to more how they can strengthen their own argument with their quote choices and how they explain them. Earlier on I made a comment on Elina’s essay where she included a point where she included her own opinion and it did not seem right where it was so I made a comment. That was one of the few things I think I looked at when I was peer reviewing at this point. In the last peer review session we had, I made comments about where a sentence did not seem right but also like in Molly’s case in her last essay, I told her where to add quotes and if the quotes seemed explained enough.