Learning Outcomes 5 and 6

A lot of my errors throughout drafts and essays are related to run on sentences. In the first two essays and with my lab report that I had to do for my marine biology lab, I had a lot of run on sentences. These sentences did not have commas and they also did not seem to make complete sense to anyone but me at the time. In this last essay, I really tried to cut down on those sentences, and a lot of the time all I needed to do was add a comma. When dealing with MLA format, it is not too hard to understand and get correct. A couple of times, I have made an error with capitalization and in text citations. In the first essay, I had a lot of errors when it came to sentences and MLA, but peer editing helped and I realized it for the first time completely when writing my lab report.